This was a tough one to improve on without re-shooting but you did make some improvements. Your choices for the cuts in the fight scene are an imporvement and a couple of shots with the pills had better timing. A good little video is now better.
Did you re-shoot the fight scene? I'm so bad at telling but I still wish there was more before the illusion was on the floor... Also, YES slowing down the clip on the medication & cutting down the cereal scene really made the film well-rounded.
I like how you re did the fight scene so now the winning ticket is showing.. great work..
ReplyDeleteThis was a tough one to improve on without re-shooting but you did make some improvements. Your choices for the cuts in the fight scene are an imporvement and a couple of shots with the pills had better timing. A good little video is now better.
ReplyDeleteDid you re-shoot the fight scene? I'm so bad at telling but I still wish there was more before the illusion was on the floor...
ReplyDeleteAlso, YES slowing down the clip on the medication & cutting down the cereal scene really made the film well-rounded.